Update grammar, name, and description of twstl9 entry

I decided to keep the main description of the Tomb Raider, but just
updated it in a way that it would flow better. I also changed the
title of the entry so that it would be more inline with the
title style of other entries.

web/atlas.json

@@ -1674,7 +1674,7 @@
 {"id": "twsubo", "submitted_by": "ItsFrisbeeTho", "name": "Pusheen", "description": "Pusheen is a cat who debuted in the comic strip 'Pusheen Things' on the website Everyday Cute. It gained popular from its appearance in Facebook and Android message stickers. Here, it is shown eating the Dutch flag.", "website": "https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pusheen", "subreddit": "/r/PlaceNL", "center": [559.5, 1961.5], "path": [[551.5, 1967.5], [552.5, 1967.5], [553.5, 1968.5], [554.5, 1968.5], [555.5, 1967.5], [556.5, 1967.5], [557.5, 1967.5], [558.5, 1968.5], [559.5, 1968.5], [560.5, 1967.5], [561.5, 1967.5], [562.5, 1967.5], [563.5, 1968.5], [564.5, 1968.5], [567.5, 1968.5], [568.5, 1967.5], [569.5, 1966.5], [569.5, 1960.5], [568.5, 1959.5], [568.5, 1958.5], [567.5, 1957.5], [566.5, 1956.5], [565.5, 1956.5], [564.5, 1955.5], [560.5, 1955.5], [559.5, 1954.5], [558.5, 1953.5], [557.5, 1954.5], [556.5, 1955.5], [555.5, 1955.5], [554.5, 1955.5], [553.5, 1954.5], [552.5, 1953.5], [551.5, 1954.5], [551.5, 1955.5], [550.5, 1956.5], [550.5, 1957.5], [549.5, 1957.5], [548.5, 1957.5], [548.5, 1959.5], [549.5, 1959.5], [549.5, 1964.5], [550.5, 1965.5], [550.5, 1966.5], [551.5, 1967.5], [552.5, 1967.5]]},
 {"id": "twsu4c", "submitted_by": "Mythagical", "name": "Golden Egg", "description": "A golden egg from Salmon Run, a game mode in Splatoon 2.", "website": "https://splatoonwiki.org/wiki/Golden_Egg", "subreddit": "/r/splatoon", "center": [1119.5, 1891.5], "path": [[1110.5, 1882.5], [1110.5, 1899.5], [1127.5, 1900.5], [1127.5, 1882.5]]},
 {"id": "twsu1s", "submitted_by": "nuoony", "name": "Kurzgesagt duck", "description": "A mascot of the German YouTube channel 'Kurzgesagt - In a Nutshell'.", "website": "https://kurzgesagt.org", "subreddit": "/r/kurzgesagt, /r/placeDE", "center": [671.5, 858.5], "path": [[672.5, 850.5], [670.5, 850.5], [669.5, 851.5], [668.5, 852.5], [667.5, 852.5], [667.5, 853.5], [668.5, 854.5], [667.5, 855.5], [667.5, 858.5], [666.5, 859.5], [666.5, 860.5], [665.5, 861.5], [665.5, 864.5], [667.5, 864.5], [668.5, 863.5], [669.5, 864.5], [676.5, 864.5], [678.5, 862.5], [679.5, 862.5], [679.5, 859.5], [678.5, 858.5], [677.5, 858.5], [676.5, 857.5], [673.5, 857.5], [673.5, 855.5], [674.5, 854.5], [674.5, 852.5], [673.5, 851.5]]},
-{"id": "twstl9", "submitted_by": "MBog22", "name": "Tomb Raider, Lara Croft", "description": "Tomb Raider has had many games starting from the series' debut in 1996, spanning multiple continuities, with several iterations of the titular character, Lara Croft.nLara Croft earned the title of Tomb Raider but it was her intelligent, strong, fearless, and independent personality that took the world by storm and cemented her as a true pop icon.", "website": "https://tombraider.square-enix-games.com/en-us", "subreddit": "/r/tombraider", "center": [1864.5, 1547.5], "path": [[1875.5, 1554.5], [1875.5, 1538.5], [1852.5, 1538.5], [1852.5, 1555.5], [1875.5, 1555.5]]},
+{"id": "twstl9", "submitted_by": "MBog22", "name": "Lara Croft (Tomb Raider)", "description": "A pixel art depicting Lara Croft, the main protagonist and mascot of the Tomb Raider franchise.\n \nTomb Raider has had many games starting from the series' debut in 1996, spanning multiple continuities, with several iterations of Lara Croft.\n \nWhile Lara Croft would gain the title of Tomb Raider due to her skills as an archaeologist, it was her intelligent, strong, fearless, and independent personality that would take the world by storm and cement her as a true pop culture icon.", "website": "https://tombraider.square-enix-games.com/en-us", "subreddit": "/r/tombraider", "center": [1864.5, 1547.5], "path": [[1875.5, 1554.5], [1875.5, 1538.5], [1852.5, 1538.5], [1852.5, 1555.5], [1875.5, 1555.5]]},
 {"id": "twstfl", "submitted_by": "yaycupcake", "name": "Cherry Bullet", "description": "Logo of K-pop girl group Cherry Bullet.", "website": "https://www.fncent.com/CherryBullet/", "subreddit": "/r/CherryBullet", "center": [1712.5, 875.5], "path": [[1706.5, 869.5], [1706.5, 880.5], [1718.5, 880.5], [1718.5, 870.5], [1718.5, 869.5]]},
 {"id": "twst8u", "submitted_by": "Paolaxo", "name": "Silithur Logo", "description": "The silithur channel that helped a large part of the Hispanic community when it needed it most", "website": "https://www.twitch.tv/silithur", "subreddit": "", "center": [1803.5, 453.5], "path": [[1783.5, 432.5], [1823.5, 432.5], [1822.5, 474.5], [1783.5, 474.5]]},
 {"id": "twsswm", "submitted_by": "28PercentCharged", "name": "Teardown", "description": "A recreation of the Teardown game logo", "website": "https://teardowngame.com/", "subreddit": "/r/teardowngame", "center": [1341.5, 136.5], "path": [[1334.5, 131.5], [1334.5, 141.5], [1342.5, 145.5], [1349.5, 141.5], [1348.5, 130.5], [1341.5, 127.5]]},