[DOCS] Clarification in tutorial (#59088)

* Cl[DOCS] arification in tutorial

* Review comments

docs/getting-started/tutorial-discovering.asciidoc

@@ -1,20 +1,19 @@
 [[tutorial-discovering]]
 === Discover your data
 
-Using *Discover*, you can enter
+Using *Discover*, enter
 an {ref}/query-dsl-query-string-query.html#query-string-syntax[Elasticsearch
 query] to search your data and filter the results.
 
 . Open *Discover*.
 +
-The current index pattern appears below the filter bar, in this case `shakes*`.
+The `shakes*` index pattern appears.
-You might need to click *New* in the menu bar to refresh the data.
 
-. Click the caret to the right of the current index pattern, and select `ba*`.
+. To make `ba*` the current index, click the index pattern dropdown, then select `ba*`.
 +
 By default, all fields are shown for each matching document.
 
-. In the search field, enter the following string:
+. In the search field, enter:
 +
 [source,text]
 account_number<100 AND balance>47500
@@ -25,11 +24,10 @@ excess of 47,500. Results appear for account numbers 8, 32, 78, 85, and 97.
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 image::images/tutorial-discover-2.png[]
 +
-. To choose which
+. Hover over the list of *Available fields*, then
-fields to display, hover the pointer over the list of *Available fields*
+click *add* next to each field you want include as a column in the table.
-and then click *add* next to each field you want include as a column in the table.
 +
-For example, if you add the `account_number` field, the display changes to a list of five
+For example, when you add the `account_number` field, the display changes to a list of five
 account numbers.
 +
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