From 895131ad720f3f9c387f171f632ad876e3cfff74 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: woow101 <62764135+woow101@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 12 Oct 2020 02:28:28 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Update advancements.json Edits to several advancement titles and descriptions for errors and consistency. --- .../create/lang/default/advancements.json | 50 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/main/resources/assets/create/lang/default/advancements.json b/src/main/resources/assets/create/lang/default/advancements.json index ea54a7ea9..e4ba08919 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/assets/create/lang/default/advancements.json +++ b/src/main/resources/assets/create/lang/default/advancements.json @@ -7,19 +7,19 @@ "advancement.create.its_alive": "It's Alive!", "advancement.create.its_alive.desc": "Watch your first kinetic component spin.", - "advancement.create.shifting_gears": "Shifting Gear", - "advancement.create.shifting_gears.desc": "Connect a large to a small cogwheel allowing you to change the speed of your contraption.", + "advancement.create.shifting_gears": "Shifting Gears", + "advancement.create.shifting_gears.desc": "Connect a Large Cogwheel to a Small Cogwheel, allowing you to change the speed of your contraption.", "advancement.create.overstressed": "Overstressed", "advancement.create.overstressed.desc": "Experience the limits of stress firsthand.", - "advancement.create.belt": "Convey it all", + "advancement.create.belt": "Convey Tt All", "advancement.create.belt.desc": "Connect two shafts with a Mechanical Belt.", "advancement.create.wrench": "Configure Conveniently", "advancement.create.wrench.desc": "Create a Wrench to aid you in building your contraptions.", - "advancement.create.goggles": "Stress-o-vision", - "advancement.create.goggles.desc": "Create some goggles to aid you in getting more kinetic information for components.", - "advancement.create.speedometer": "But how fast exactly?", + "advancement.create.goggles": "Stress-O-Vision", + "advancement.create.goggles.desc": "Create some Engineer's Goggles to aid you in getting more kinetic information from components.", + "advancement.create.speedometer": "But How Fast Exactly?", "advancement.create.speedometer.desc": "Place and power a Speedometer. Look at it through your goggles to read its exact value.", - "advancement.create.stressometer": "But how stressed exactly?", + "advancement.create.stressometer": "But How Stressed Exactly?", "advancement.create.stressometer.desc": "Place and power a Stressometer. Look at it through your goggles to read its exact value.", "advancement.create.water_wheel": "Harnessing Hydraulics", @@ -27,25 +27,25 @@ "advancement.create.lava_wheel": "Magma Wheel", "advancement.create.lava_wheel.desc": "This shouldn't have worked.", "advancement.create.millstone": "Pocket Crusher", - "advancement.create.millstone.desc": "Place and power a Millstone", + "advancement.create.millstone.desc": "Place and power a Millstone.", "advancement.create.andesite_casing": "The Andesite Age", "advancement.create.andesite_casing.desc": "Use some Andesite Alloy and Wood to create a basic Casing.", - "advancement.create.mechanical_drill": "Stationary breakers", - "advancement.create.mechanical_drill.desc": "Place and power a Mechanical mechanical_drill", - "advancement.create.press": "Press goes 'Bonk!'", - "advancement.create.press.desc": "Power a Mechanical Press and use it to create some Plates.", + "advancement.create.mechanical_drill": "Stationary Breakers", + "advancement.create.mechanical_drill.desc": "Place and power a Mechanical Drill.", + "advancement.create.press": "Press Goes 'Bonk!'", + "advancement.create.press.desc": "Power a Mechanical Press and use it to create some Sheets.", "advancement.create.polished_rose_quartz": "Pink Diamonds", - "advancement.create.polished_rose_quartz.desc": "Use a piece of sand paper to polish Rose Quartz until it becomes transparent.", - "advancement.create.electron_tube": "Beep boop", + "advancement.create.polished_rose_quartz.desc": "Use a piece of Sand Paper to polish Rose Quartz until it becomes transparent.", + "advancement.create.electron_tube": "Beep Boop", "advancement.create.electron_tube.desc": "Make some Electron Tubes, useful in crafting less primitive machinery.", "advancement.create.mechanical_saw": "Stationary Chopping", - "advancement.create.mechanical_saw.desc": "Place and power a Mechanical Saw", + "advancement.create.mechanical_saw.desc": "Place and power a Mechanical Saw.", "advancement.create.basin": "Basin Operation", - "advancement.create.basin.desc": "Place a basin and try throwing items into it.", - "advancement.create.mixer": "Mixin' it Up", - "advancement.create.mixer.desc": "Place a Mechanical Mixer above the basin, power it, and start mixing some ingredients.", + "advancement.create.basin.desc": "Place a Basin and try throwing items into it.", + "advancement.create.mixer": "Mixin' It Up", + "advancement.create.mixer.desc": "Place a Mechanical Mixer above the Basin, power it, and start mixing some ingredients.", "advancement.create.compact": "Automated Compacting", - "advancement.create.compact.desc": "Use a press and a basin to compact some items.", + "advancement.create.compact.desc": "Use a Press and a Basin to compact some items.", "advancement.create.expert_lane_1": "The Andesite Expert Lane", "advancement.create.expert_lane_1.desc": "Work in Progress", @@ -55,15 +55,15 @@ "advancement.create.brass_casing": "The Brass Age", "advancement.create.brass_casing.desc": "Use newly obtained Brass and some Wood to create a more advanced Casing.", "advancement.create.copper_casing": "The Copper Age", - "advancement.create.copper_casing.desc": "Use some copper sheets to create Copper Casing.", + "advancement.create.copper_casing.desc": "Use some Copper Sheets and Wood to create some Copper Casings.", "advancement.create.crafter": "Automated Assembly", - "advancement.create.crafter.desc": "Place and power some Mechanical Crafters", + "advancement.create.crafter.desc": "Place and power some Mechanical Crafters.", "advancement.create.deployer": "Poke, Place, and Attack", "advancement.create.deployer.desc": "Place and power a Deployer, the perfect reflection of yourself.", "advancement.create.mechanical_arm": "Mechanical Grab'n'Drop", - "advancement.create.mechanical_arm.desc": "Craft a Mechanical Arm, select in- and outputs, place it down and give it power; then watch it do all the work for you.", - "advancement.create.musical_arm": "Play me my Theme Tune!", + "advancement.create.mechanical_arm.desc": "Craft a Mechanical Arm, select in- and outputs, place it down and give it power; then watch as it does all the work for you.", + "advancement.create.musical_arm": "Play Me My Theme Tune!", "advancement.create.musical_arm.desc": "Watch a Mechanical Arm operate your Jukebox.", "advancement.create.fist_bump": "Pound It, Bro!", "advancement.create.fist_bump.desc": "Make two Deployers fist-bump.", @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ "advancement.create.refined_radiance": "Bright and Inspiring", "advancement.create.refined_radiance.desc": "Create Refined Radiance, a powerful chromatic substance.", - "advancement.create.zapper": "Building with style", + "advancement.create.zapper": "Building With Style", "advancement.create.zapper.desc": "Craft a Blockzapper. A radiant laser gun that helps you build.", "advancement.create.upgraded_zapper": "Radiant Overdrive", "advancement.create.upgraded_zapper.desc": "Create and activate a fully upgraded Blockzapper.", @@ -93,4 +93,4 @@ "advancement.create.eob": "End of Beta", "advancement.create.eob.desc": "Expect more content here in the future. <3" -} \ No newline at end of file +}